Brayton


 * Brayton **** West **** 4-H 12/14/2010 **

** MUDSHARK **

The mystery story I chose is MudShark. MudShark is a kid in school who is super cool! He is like the detective in the school, and everyone comes to him if they have a problem. The mystery, in my story, is that day by day each classroom’s erasers were stolen. The librarian, Ms. Underdorf, has a parrot, guinea pig, and an armadillo. The guinea pig is also missing! The principal made an announcement about the missing stuff, and MudShark was on the case. MudShark was out side at recess when he observed a man walking into the basement of the school. When all the kids lined up, MudShark fell to the back of the line. Instead of going in with the other kids, MudShark snuck to the basement. MudShark saw the custodian in the school basement. That’s when he also saw the erasers, and the guinea pig. Another school mystery solved by MudShark! The thing I liked about this book is that I like mysteries, and the character in my story likes mysteries too. The character I like best is MudShark. MudShark is the detective in the story, well he acts like it. I wouldn`t change anything about this book because, I like Gary Paulson and I think he is a good children’s, and a good grownups writer. The thing I learned about my story is that, you might be able to do, it but you sometimes you don`t always get away with it.